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danarees (2502) 2007-10-08 20:34

This is a clever composition, the foreshadowed shapes yet the saturated colors in the foreground with the almost gray shapes in the background.

Thanks
Dana

happypoppeye (4819) 2007-10-09 9:12

Good color Jeffrey. I also see the resemblance of a skyline in the sculpture. It's definitely an interesting subject. I sort of agree with note about the TLPP...but not sure what. Maybe too much sky. It may also be your POV, at a really sharp angle to the sculpture, although I'm not sure what's down the upper west side that would add more interest. Still, I think a more straight on shot may have worked better.

I'm not on a computer I can do workshops on but I would suggest to first try and crop off maybe the upper quarter of the photo, placing more emphasis on the sculpture and the color.

John

PS - just saw your WS on the Belarus girl. Nice friggin work on that one, thats the best WS I've seen in a while.