Photographer's Note
Statue, Mont Rigaud, Quιbec, Canada
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sarastro
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(590) 2003-10-27 17:14
it is an interesting subject, but I feel that all the branches and leafs make the picture too noisy, it drowns the serenity and the cleanness of the statue.
I would have tried to make this a vertical composition. Also, maybe you could have used the dip where the railings meet as a framing for the statue by moving to the right and down a bit.
I made a Workshop that shows what I mean but I have filled my quota today so I will post it tomorrow.
papagolf21
(152605) 2003-10-28 1:18
L'on mesure mieux l'importance de la statue sur cette prise de vue. La partie infιrieure de l'image gβche lιgθrement la composition. Un petit atelier de retouche.
Bien cordialement.
We measure better the importance of the statue on this recording. The bottom of the image wastes(spoils) slightly the composition. A small workshop(studio) of alteration(retouch).
Very cordially.
mtolloczko
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(201) 2003-10-28 1:56
Oh, what a shame about the bench seat being in the way, or was it a railing fence? Otherwise the subject is great and the colours, shadows and textures make this image soulfull. An interesting serene setting. I like the fact that the focus is not totally on the statue but on a combination of statue and nature. It seems to be a spiritually charged setting where the statue is symbolic and to work its magic it must be in a busy natural environment. Good placement.
Photo Information
- Copyright: Patrick Paradis (Maestro) (87)
- Genre: Τοποθεσίες
- Medium: Έγχρωμο
- Date Taken: 2003-10-00
- Categories: Έργο τέχνης
- Έκδοση φωτογραφίας: Πρωτότυπη έκδοση, Workshop
- Θέμα(τα): Statue [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2003-10-27 15:45
