Photographer's Note
Another posting from my walk. I shot this into the sun, I just liked the way the sun was playing on the river. Perhaps someone could give me some tips on what I could have done to get a better shot
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tyro
(30513) 2008-01-29 15:52
Hello, Denise.
I like this one!
Photographs taken into the sun are notoriously difficult to expose correctly but you have done a great job here. I know what it's like when you're pressured by companions to take a shot and keep moving - not conducent to good pictures! I usually get something like, "Come on, Grandpa"!
I think it could do with a little sharpening, so I've done a wee workshop for you - I hope you won't be offended. I increased the contrast and the colour saturation a wee bit and then sharpened it. I used Photoshop Elements 6 which i bought just a couple of weeks ago but it's no better at this sort of thing than the Elements 2 which came with my camera.
Your exposure is fine but you have achieved it using an even smaller stop or aperture (f/36) than you used in your last shot of the bridge. I note that both pictures were taken at 1/60 sec. so that leads me to believe that you might have the camera set on shutter priority, so that it shoots at 1/60 sec. whatever you're taking and it adjusts the aperture accordingly. Have a look and see if your camera's set to shutter priority - I rather suspect it is.
Often the best thing is to set it to "P" so the camera can do the programming itself for you. I find that's good for most things though I often use aperture priority if I want a specific aperture - either a wide one (small f/number) for narrow depth of field or a small one (big f/number) for good depth of field. I hardly ever use shutter priority - I'd tend to use that if I wanted a fast shutter speed to capture a moving object.
These are just a few of my simple observations. I am far from qualified to give you any advice - these are just the ramblings of an old guy who's been playing with cameras for a long time. At least when I started, my old simple camera had a very limited number of shutter speeds and apertures so it was easier!
I'd be very interested to hear what others have to say!
But this is a great shot - you are too apologetic in your note and you have no reason to be!
Kind Regards,
John.
P.S. Sorry, but I haven't finished yet! I was having another look at this one and also your last posting of the bridge. Do you see that on both pictures there is a tiny blemish or spot just towards the top left - it's on the sky in this one and in the other one it's also in the sky but right next to the curve of the bridge. I think that is a little tiny spot of dust on your camera's sensor. It's pretty small and probably hardly worth bothering about and, if you use a wider aperture (say f/5.6 to f/16 or so) I bet you won't see it. Dust appears to be more obvious with small apertures, I find. If you really want to try to remove the dust, be very, very careful indeed and read the instruction book first! Use only a blower and don't ever touch the sensor itself.
Sorry to be so long-winded!!!
SummerSound
(73) 2008-02-01 0:56
Hi Denise,
I think this is a really nice shot. It's well framed and has a very appealing 'misty morning' feel to it!
I've no idea what you could have done better with the camera (I'm no expert there myself!) but then I think John has covered that for you very nicely! (Excellent advice John)
I've got a bit of post-production advice though, if you're interested? If you look at the trees on the left and right side, you'll see that they're quite washed out. I'd have selected those areas in PhotoShop and used Levels or Curves to darken the mid-tones/shadows. I think you'll find this will give them much more 'punch'. I would sharpen these areas with 'Unsharp Mask' too because they seem a little soft. (I'd be careful about sharpening the whole image because the foreground already looks a bit noisy and sharpening will make this worse!)
I'd also experiment with the overall colour balance, again using Levels and/or Curves. If you can work in CMYK then I'd try reducing the magenta, particularly in the shadow areas. There seems to be a real purpley cast to the image and it might add to the cool/misty style of the image to remove it.
I hope this was helpful!
Tom
Photo Information
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Copyright: Denise Middleton (Denisem)
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- Genre: Τοποθεσίες
- Medium: Έγχρωμο
- Date Taken: 2008-01-27
- Categories: Καθημερινότητα
- Camera: Nikon D50 Digital SLR
- Έκθεση: f/36.0, 1/60 δευτερόλεπτα
- More Photo Info: view
- Έκδοση φωτογραφίας: Πρωτότυπη έκδοση, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2008-01-29 12:09
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