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RGatward
(20108) 2006-04-24 4:25
Very cute, great timing, with her head turned jsut the right amount, and I like the framing of the hand. I'm in two minds about the amount of pay booth to have included. On the one hand it's relevant to the story being told here, on the other, its an extra focus for the compo, away from teh girl. Maybe a compromise would have been to crop a bit more from the right, or maybe this is best afterall, just tying as I think here. Nice one.
sam224
(6215) 2006-04-24 7:40
Very cute capture. Nice perspective and composition with expression of the little girl attracting the eye.
Good job!
RADEEH
(2802) 2006-04-24 11:51
Now you have to travel to India..........
I admire the DoF in this capture.
Great work. Wonderful composition.
abhishek
(288) 2006-04-24 15:45
Quite a fascinating idea to bring out a joint project! Certainly the result from your new toy is there to be seen in terms of picture quality. Both the colour and the b/w version.
However, after surfing to and fro between ur & Richard's snaps, I realised that while Richard's collection focusses more on the fair, your's are more to do with the subjects/individuals!
I'm not sure what ur objective is from the project but the element of the 'Bates funfair' is totally missing from the first two snaps u've posted and appears just a little in the final (colour) snap.
Had the note not mention about the fair, I wouldn't have known that these snaps are not from a neighbourhood park!!??
Having said that lemme tell you that I'm otherwise impressed by the moments you've captured with your subjects.
In this particular picture, I do like ur attempt to juxtapose the animated 'lady in pink' against the background, particularly with that expression which makes her look conscious... In a way it appears she's conscious of her surroundings... But do I see a hint of tears in her eyes or m I jas imagining??
Waiting for more from the fair!
Cheers
Abhishek
tcht
(7565) 2006-04-24 15:49
Hi Kaj,
What I like: bright colours, her expression , lighting, sharpness
Wht I don't like: focus and placement of girl.
It'd look much better if you've isolated her from that (not quite important) background... That big sign 'PAY HERE' carried me away from her emotions and the brighter colours of background absorbs the little girl, again limiting her emotion. B&W may work nicer? And I agree about RGatward's way of cropping the right...Of course it's best to put girl more to the centre or the 'hand contact' to the centre @ first place.
Nice attempt, keep trying ;)
vts_ch
(2624) 2006-04-24 16:00
the quality of your shot as increase in a great manner. Sharp images and always this sharp eye, so caracterised of yours.
Looking forward to see more of your picts.
This one is not one of my prefered but I have to admit your talent.
Keep the hard work.
Vince
samrat_roy1
(701) 2006-04-25 23:32
hi,
i like to distinctness of the shot. vibrant colurs....great job done...
nivas37
(662) 2006-04-28 13:57
Hi Kajal,
One of the main elements in this pic is the vivid colors that you have chosen for the project. While at times this can quite go overboard, you seem to have used an excellent DOF, angle and framing to bring out some good work.
I have posted a workshop on this picture, but it actually is not the real sorts of WS you see on TE. I was just wondering on what if I cropped a significant part of your image and concentrated solely on the girl alone. Obviously, I wouldn’t be able to bring it to a width of 800px (which would cause an absolute torture to your image with the distortion). Instead I’m leaving it the same small size, and maybe since you have the original file, you can think of doing the larger version.
Rgds / Nivas
mrbialy
(2568) 2006-05-04 12:13
I really like this one. This is my favourite kind of photography. Simple, interesting composition with subscription on the background and someone in the foreground. And thet hand of course, and very good colours and quality and sharpness. I think this is your the best photo. well done and good luck
drewkaya
(86) 2006-05-06 14:09
Nice shot and moment. The connection at the hands with expression on the girls face is great. Pink on pink is great too. "Pay Here" somehow makes it all very poignant.
Photo Information
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Copyright: Kajal Nisha Patel (kajspice)
(4542)
- Genre: Άνθρωποι
- Medium: Έγχρωμο
- Date Taken: 2006-04-19
- Categories: Αποφασιστική στιγμή
- Camera: Canon EOS 350D
- Έκδοση φωτογραφίας: Πρωτότυπη έκδοση, Workshop
- Θέμα(τα): day out at Leicester Fair by kajspice & RGatward [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2006-04-24 4:08
Discussions
- To tcht: your critique... (1)
by kajspice, last updated 2006-04-24 04:13 - To abhishek: objectives at the fair... (1)
by kajspice, last updated 2006-04-24 04:49 - To vts_ch: improvement... (1)
by kajspice, last updated 2006-04-24 05:25 - To nivas37: your workshop... (1)
by kajspice, last updated 2006-05-01 01:40