Photographer's Note
well this is going to be one of my final shots from my holiday series, i dont have too many pictures left that i would willingly share with you!
this one again taken from a profitable night at the savannah bar whilst watching the sunset.
i cant say anything about this shot that i havent already said in other shots, so please look at my pictures for any information you need.
i am not sure about the bright sun on this one, i played with cropping it out but it just made the picture look uneven with the relfections on the water.
the dots that are all over the picture are drops of water from the water splashing at the bottom, im not sure if i like them as far up so they intereupt with the boat though.
PP includes cropping, contrasts, brightness, and auto colour.
i hope you like it, thanks for looking, comments and critiques welcome! :)
supereira, papagolf21, sam224, Tue έχουν(ει) επιλέξει αυτή τη σημείωση ως χρήσιμη
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Paolo
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(41258) 2005-07-18 5:20
Nice image Steven!
you composed very well that view.
the waves are also well captured.
porbably the light is too strong on the right side and have a strong noisy effect on the boat.
thanks, ciao
supereira
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(9576) 2005-07-18 5:30
I like the composition and DOF.Good reflections in the water.I like the contrast between the sky and the boats.Good light and sharpness.Well done!
papagolf21
(152601) 2005-07-18 7:21
Bonjour Steven,
Le soleil ιtait encore trop fort et la surexposition s'est installιe sur les vagues.
Malgrι tout, la composition est agrιable et je comprends fort bien l'intιrκt reprιsentι par cette vue.
Attention au capteur (le soleil n'est guθre apprιciι par celui-ci).
Amitiιs.
Philippe
joseelias
(0) 2005-07-18 8:19
Well I feel that the sky is a bit strong in this one. I do like it there, even being white but the problem is that it is a bit big and draws much attention. A solution could be to crop the top until the base of the sun eliminating almost all of it. The image would get square but it would be more balanced in the exposure. The bottom part of the photo is very nice with the rocks and waves splashing into them.
cigdom
(2594) 2005-07-18 8:25
i think it is another great shot!!!and i think you could have captured the sun better.
but good composition
regards...
cigdem
sam224
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(6215) 2005-07-18 10:32
Good shot Steven.. I like the drops jumping high as well as the silhouette in the BG. The light is very strong but you managed to handle it anyway. Good job!
HD462
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(280) 2005-07-18 10:49
Another nice sunset shot. I think you're right about the sun being too much in this one though. The left hand portion of the sky also looks very pixellated, might have happened during the PP work.
I think I'd have cropped like you say, maybe at the top of the mast on the right hand boat.
sayzey
(2358) 2005-07-18 15:03
Quite grainy this shot, and im also not sure about the dots over the sun from the sea, you cant quite tell what it is without reading the note.
Still its a pleasing scene and as you say this particular sunset provided you with quite a few nice shots!
Tue
(82326) 2005-07-18 17:45
Hi Steven,
I think the splashing water in front of the sunset and the boat actually gives a nice effect. You composed this picture well too, with the sun on the right hand side, right above the boat, so it's a very good shot again!
Groeten,
Lars
nilolabrador
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(1469) 2005-07-19 4:40
Yes, the sky is maybe too strong but theres a strong feeling
of sea with the wave in the foreground.
Kenny10pin
(19301) 2005-07-19 14:19
very nice work, I like the sun, it looks like it is melting the boat, well done
Photo Information
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Copyright: Steven Danby (danby1)
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(3697) - Genre: Τοποθεσίες
- Medium: Έγχρωμο
- Date Taken: 2005-06-30
- Categories: Φύση
- Camera: Sony Cybershot V1, Sony Memory Stick
- Έκθεση: f/8, 1/1250 δευτερόλεπτα
- More Photo Info: view
- Έκδοση φωτογραφίας: Πρωτότυπη έκδοση
- Οδοιπορικό: Ibiza Holiday
- Date Submitted: 2005-07-18 5:17
