Photographer's Note
Portrait, a draughtsman on the fair of Luri. In the Corsica race.
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chrischris
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(877) 2003-09-04 16:12
Une trθs jolie photo en trois plans : le dessinateur, l'esquisse et le modθle : chacune de ces parties est parfaitement nette : bravo.
ninadev
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(5377) 2003-09-04 16:52
I can only agree with Chris' critique, very sell seen by him. The composition is very nice and this kid has a really cute face so he makes a real nice subject. I would have chosen though to focus on the boy or on the hand of the artist instead of on his hat. But the difference is not that much and the picture is still very nice.
Luko
(14000) 2003-09-04 18:12
The formal compo of this shot is actually very good, leading us from the artist to his subject in 3 parts, the great stuff is that each part slightly overlaps the other in order to get all the features strongly related but still providing a very easy and clear overall reading.
Really a one in its kind...
cosyCloud
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(158) 2003-09-05 3:18
Very nice picture. Pretty much just a repeat of what the other have said. The composition is good. Although I disagree with Nina about focusing on the boy. It's very well put together. Great Job :)
martin
(1242) 2003-09-16 14:26
An excellent composition that achieves a simple harmony out of a relatively complex subject.
femkevdh
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(2633) 2003-09-18 17:42
exactly the point where we always look over the artist's shoulder to see if the resemblance subject-drawing is any good. And you took exactly that picture! Works realy well!
Photo Information
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Copyright: Dominique Tison (dominique)
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(11414) - Genre: Τοποθεσίες
- Medium: Έγχρωμο
- Date Taken: 2003-07-04
- Categories: Καθημερινότητα
- Camera: finepixA204
- Έκθεση: f/3.5, 1/256 δευτερόλεπτα
- Έκδοση φωτογραφίας: Πρωτότυπη έκδοση
- Θέμα(τα): People Having their portrait done [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2003-09-04 15:43
