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Photographer's Note
On the way to Pokhara, we spent that night in the bus. It was taken from the running bus. In the original shot, there was an electric wire passed through the middle of the picture. At thet time I couldn't ignore it. After that, in P/S somehow I manage to remove it. Any comment is welcome.
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bmukherjee
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(1516) 2009-12-22 9:04
Hello Manas,
This photo is certainly more appropriate for colour - the warm background tones are beautiful. Also, the layers are wonderful here.
Somehow, I feel the composition was better on the previous shot. The sloping hills aren't balanced in this one - the photo seems a bit one-sided. The previous shot had that neat curved hill and the snow peak at left, so it 'felt' better.
tfs,
Biswaroop
auldal
(1380) 2009-12-22 10:58
Manas
It would be interesting to see the original shot. You've done a great job on removing the wires, I like the muted colours and shades.
The frame and fading edges enhance the shot, in both this and the previous post.
Alastair
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Copyright: Manas Banerjee (ban_man)
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(528) - Genre: Τοποθεσίες
- Medium: Έγχρωμο
- Date Taken: 2009-03-00
- Categories: Φύση
- Έκδοση φωτογραφίας: Πρωτότυπη έκδοση
- Date Submitted: 2009-12-22 8:54
