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Jakab
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(3867) 2007-08-20 8:44
Hello Tsetsegee,
interesting faces, good perspective, but I think
- the colours are unnatural (probably due to the scanning),
- through cutting a part from the right the father would come out of the centre in a better place (1/3 of the picture) and the whole photo would be more concentrated.
I send you in WS what I mean.
Best whishes
Laszlo
prumod
(8300) 2007-08-24 2:32
hi tsetsgee...
it's a nice shot... the expresions of the father and son are very attractive... son is little bit serious! good light position and shadows...
greetings...
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Copyright: Tsetsegee Sumiya (tsetsegee)
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(122) - Genre: Άνθρωποι
- Medium: Έγχρωμο
- Date Taken: 2001-09-00
- Categories: Καθημερινότητα
- Camera: Canon A-1, Canon Zoom Lenz FD 35-70mm 1:4, Fuji 200 color
- Έκθεση: f/11, 1/125 δευτερόλεπτα
- Έκδοση φωτογραφίας: Πρωτότυπη έκδοση, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2007-08-19 7:57
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Points: 3
