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Great graffer 2008-06-01 2:48

Hello Bev,

I very much like the composition here. The curving towpath and the canal lead the eye neatly around towards the white railings of what looks like the lock. This curve is mirrored by the drystone wall and path, which come over the hill from the top left of the picture. The large tree at the top is neatly balanced by the flowery bank at the bottom right corner.Your usual lovely soft colours throughout.

The man and his dog coming towards us, introduce a dynamic element to the image.

My only niggle:

I feel perhaps that the man and dog are a little bit too near the centre of the picture. If a small part of the right side was cropped I think the balance could be improved.

I'd like to show this idea in a WS.



Old 06-01-2008, 09:57 AM
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Many thanks for your warm comments, Peter.

I am always pleased when someone takes the time to do a w/s on my shots. It gives good ideas and helps to understand different interpretations.

I think you were quite right. The man was a little central.

Have a good day,
Bev :-)
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