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Good ben4321 2006-06-07 9:01

Nice enough shot, but in my opinion the light is a bit dull and lifeless, and the composition needs to be tightened up a bit.
You should have got a bit closer to the boats because at the moment there's a bit too much foreground and it would be better if you had excluded that patch of tarmac in the bottom left hand corner.

Old 06-07-2006, 06:52 PM
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Thanks for the critique, I tend to agree with you about the space in the foreground, the tarmac bothers me as well. But I don't agree that it's too dull. If the sun were shining it would be far less interesting a picture. Lifeless is in fact what I was after, indeed I cloned out a person walking along the jetty.
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