tcht 2006-04-23 17:07
Hello Trish,
My first time looking @ your gallery and found a very nice picture.
And having read the previous critiques, I think it doesn't really matter if the petals were sharper or if the flag were sharp, both ways work fine to me.
In fact, I like the present setting with a solid 'frame' of the petals supporting the blurred colours of the Union Jack. Good creative and original composition. Only wish the overall frame to be sharper and perhaps brighter too. (made a workshop to show how...hope u like it) TFS.
Regards,
CheukHin
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04-24-2006, 12:27 AM
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To tcht: Workshop: what a change!
Hi
Thankyou for stepping into my gallery! I'm really glad you attempted a workshop - I wasn't sure myself whether or not to increase the contrast/improve the colour but I can see why you did this. The colours of the flag jump out at you plus the flowers don't look as pale anymore. The reason why I probably didn't do this is because the day was overcast so it may have looked slightly odd to make the flowers and flag brighter. Not sure how to change the sky. Thanks for your input, will take a look at your gallery soon! Trish 
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