Shutter2Think 2005-02-11 20:34
That's a very beautiful shot of the sunrise. I like the color of the clouds and the pink-violet reflections they leave in the water. But, this is a "critique" and not a "comment," so let's get going. Personally, I find the composition off a bit. For one, the horizon line is in the middle and so is one of the lighthouses....avoid the middle. I think it would have been better if the horizon line was moved down to the lower third of the foreground--the dark foreground doesn't really add anything. Regarding the lighthouse in the middle of the image, it would have been good to see you pan to the right and move it more to the left. I don't know how much you've learned about composition...but, the canvas should be divided in 1/3rds...both horizontally and vertically. And where the lines meet (if you draw an image you'll see division lines that look like a "tic-tac-toe board")...are good places to have your subjects--generally speaking. Thanks for sharing.
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01-27-2005, 08:38 AM
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Re: To Shutter2Think: Hold On !!
?? I see you I missed this by some minutes. If you were trying to contact me go a head and send me email from my profile's intro.
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