Φωτογραφία | | Κριτική |
~ street portrait ~ abmdsudi
(88445)
|
 |
KevRyan
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1784 W: 193 N: 5128]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (22956) [ 2015-06-25 1:44] I like the candid nature of your shot...the dynamic framing of the turban gives a sense of movement through the frame or if he was still a sense of pre-occupation beyond it. A nicely rendered situational portrait!
bw Kev |
|
Magique alainh
(33209) *
|
 |
KevRyan
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1784 W: 193 N: 5128]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (22956) [ 2014-04-09 2:08] An image to get lost and dream in - wonderful! |
|
LONELY BOAT #2 simplyoga
(6506) *
|
|
pascalbene
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 238 W: 5 N: 83]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-n-g.gif) (1717) [ 2012-07-01 13:19] hello !
I like this pic (and all your gallery in fact). |
|
Duck SP5Piotr (56)
|
 |
KevRyan
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1784 W: 193 N: 5128]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (22956) [ 2011-09-18 2:21] Beautifully rendered - the angle and the drama of the sky re-kindle the sense of the Winds of War. I am perhaps not so in favour of the cut off of the jeep to the left - I think it's full inclusion would have added another dimension. Not sure if this was deliberate on your part to create a dynamic image which leads the eye away - maybe I would like to see two versions - the passive frame - where all the elements are contained and this one to look at the relative effects on the eye and the imagination. |
|
balaBala bantonbuju
(51815)
|
 |
KevRyan
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1784 W: 193 N: 5128]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (22956) [ 2011-09-17 15:09] Love it J - the 'treatment' works well for the subject - I like the framing very much - the focus of the child...the textures...... wonderful!
bw Kev |
|
A short break bukitgolfb301
(53894) *
|
 |
KevRyan
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1784 W: 193 N: 5128]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (22956) [ 2011-09-14 16:15] Fantastic....even in one so young such character - a fantastic expression and a wonderful relationship to you as the photographer! An image which is both traditional and contemporary at the same time. |
|
Hanagasa Ondo #3 bukitgolfb301
(53894)
|
 |
KevRyan
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1784 W: 193 N: 5128]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (22956) [ 2011-09-14 16:13] Ah Takero - a beautifully caught moment of joyful expression! I love the way her face is framed! I think she has a young heart! |
|
Mid Autumn Festival shevchenko
(20560)
|
 |
KevRyan
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1784 W: 193 N: 5128]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (22956) [ 2011-09-12 0:32] The little vignette within the vignette at the top left of the photograph is delightful....I like the tight crop and sense of intimacy provided by the square format Ally and the light and contrast provide a unique visual impression....it is as if the candles are squeezing the children into a smaller and smaller space but their fascination and involvement as they are drawn closer together is entirely on the bewitching beauty of the flames. Thanks for the comprehensive notes too. bw Kev
p.s. I use vignette in the literary sense - Vignette (literature), short, impressionistic scenes that focus on one moment or give a particular insight into a character, idea, or setting. A opposed to: Vignetting in photography, any process by which there is loss in clarity towards the corners and sides of an image. Your image does the opposite! ;-) |
|
The Villa at Dusk obie54 (56)
|
 |
KevRyan
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1784 W: 193 N: 5128]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (22956) [ 2011-06-28 17:51] [ +] A very beautiful, tranquil and painterly image - I can smell the air and delight in the atmosphere - beautiful rendition and I love your composition - the dynamic elements of the image leaving left and right connect to the wider life around the image which the lens cannot see yet the power of the framing between the trees constantly catches the eye and the imagination drawing both in to the depth of the picture...lovely!
bw Kev |
|
Negozio napoletano Kirini
(143)
|
 |
KevRyan
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1784 W: 193 N: 5128]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (22956) [ 2011-06-18 14:59] I really like your framing here - the deeper colours further into the shop integrate him into the scene, his business, so well he becomes inseparable. His character comes through so well, lovely!
bw Kev |
|
Tribute To Marie Hacene francio64
(39888)
|
 |
marietom
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2811 W: 115 N: 2487]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (34611) [ 2011-06-14 12:34] [ +] Hello Francesco,
Thank you for this work, this dedicate, and your message, so I can see it !
Very nice colors and saturation. Nice work on photoshop (my friend of each day !)
(to answer to your message, I'm going fine, hope you too !
I also think I won't come back on TE, but you can see my pictures on some other places...)
Bonne soirιe
Marie |
|
hairTsunami bantonbuju
(51815)
|
 |
KevRyan
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1784 W: 193 N: 5128]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (22956) [ 2011-05-16 9:13] Love it!! Maybe could do with more of ....or maybe better, not at all the tube light at the top but everything else rings with the textual reality of this place....I can touch it and really feel the presence of these guys.
Very nice shot Kev |
|
silentNight bantonbuju
(51815)
|
 |
KevRyan
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1784 W: 193 N: 5128]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (22956) [ 2011-05-16 9:10] hi J - I think too the cut off might have been better on the woman if at all - it is as if she is 'outside' of and 'moved away' but it's relatively minor because I really like this image and the strength of its message a lot - the little black doll adds such an interesting element too.....
bw KEv |
|
morningStar bantonbuju
(51815) *
|
 |
KevRyan
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1784 W: 193 N: 5128]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (22956) [ 2011-05-16 9:06] I like the title and the muted colour and your interpretation of the the classic image we would expect from Cuba.....of course it has sales value....on a billion T-shirts world-wide tomorrow!!
bw KEv |
|
fred'sStory bantonbuju
(51815)
|
 |
KevRyan
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1784 W: 193 N: 5128]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (22956) [ 2011-05-16 9:02] I like this - something so natural about the image - both mundane but also filmic in its way - I like the composition - the divergent near vertical lines, the car coming in top left and all the converging lines moving in that direction.....it could be a frozen moment but for me it is the beginning of a narrative.....
bw Kev |
|
delMedio bantonbuju
(51815) *
|
 |
KevRyan
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1784 W: 193 N: 5128]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (22956) [ 2011-05-16 8:58] A great perspective - like a fly on the ceiling ...it could be a film set or an artists installation but instead it's real life.....even down to the postures and the scattered place settings so evocative.
bw KEv |
|
On the Road to Santa Claus InasiaJones
(31566) *
|
 |
KevRyan
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1784 W: 193 N: 5128]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (22956) [ 2011-05-16 8:56] Beautiful shot Andre - the way the near gold and white of the mountain emerges from the cloud combined with the road which leads to such promise framed by the rock and trees is so atmospherically enticing!! I want to be there in that moment!
bw KEv |
|
Gateway jester5
(2024)
|
 |
KevRyan
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1784 W: 193 N: 5128]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (22956) [ 2011-02-28 17:12] A beautiful shot Marion deserving of more interest and attention than it has got here so far...the crop is great and the moment of the passage of the people is also well timed ....when you know somewhere really well and a photographer makes you stop and take notice again.......something is working for the photographer! |
|
Carillon jester5
(2024)
|
 |
KevRyan
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1784 W: 193 N: 5128]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (22956) [ 2011-02-28 17:07] I think that's a delightful photograph of Queen's Park - right opposite where i work! It catches this last winter perfectly!! best wishes Kev |
|
Budapest winter VII. Budapestman
(82620)
|
 |
KevRyan
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1784 W: 193 N: 5128]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (22956) [ 2010-12-29 2:46] An interesting street scene - I love the way the trees bend to shade the pavement and all the fine detail of the image - the one thing for me that could work so much better for the photograph is the timing on the first figure passing - shot a little earlier and framed between the two trees the figure would have been less unclear and provided a different balance against the distant figures but as it is one nicely gets the feel of the day.
bw Kev |
|