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Natural slide for kids in Nyala,Sudan
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dino94
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(822) 2006-12-06 8:24
Hello Serdar,
there are too many disturbing elements which distract the glance from the principal subject. I think that the image would have more impact with a vertical framing a little tighter, and with the child positioned in the left higher quarter of the photograph.
Cordially Dino.
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Copyright: Serdar Hepgul (serdarhepgul)
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(1744) - Genre: Τοποθεσίες
- Medium: Έγχρωμο
- Date Taken: 2006-12-03
- Categories: Καθημερινότητα
- Camera: Canon Rebel Digital, 24/105 L f4 CANON
- Έκδοση φωτογραφίας: Πρωτότυπη έκδοση
- Date Submitted: 2006-12-03 13:06
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Points: 4
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